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Blue Musings vol. 2, no. 3:  June 5, 2012
 

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Blue Musings

from LJCohen & Once in a Blue Muse

Creativity and Collaboration

One of the greatest opportunities of living a creative life is the chance to collaborate with colleagues.

A few months ago, the gracious and talented Jade Zivanovic (the artist who created THE BETWEEN's amazing cover) approached me, wondering if I might be interested in writing the text of a children's story she wanted to work on. She had come up with the idea and an iteration of the story in end-rhyming text, but wasn't happy with how it had turned out. She realized that what she really wanted to do was to focus on the art and would I pretty-please deal with the pesky words?

An opportunity to collaborate with an artist I respect? Whose work blows me away, regardless of the medium she uses?

This was a no-brainer.

I think I said something like "Hell, yes!"

The weeks that followed brought a flurry of ideas and snippets of story, which I sent to Jade via email at all hours of the day and night. Each time, I worried that I had somehow warped or ruined her idea, or that she would say thanks, but no thanks.

Jade responded with amazing excitement and enthusiasm, with concept sketches to go with my words until we had a first draft that we are both pretty much gobsmacked by.

Now that the words are down, Jade has the much, much harder job of completing her illustrations. I can't wait to see how this wonderful project comes together.

Stay tuned for sneak peaks and more information about The Princess and the Scarecrow project.

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What's New

The as-yet-unnamed-ghost-story is out to a few alpha readers (hubby and the boys) before I inflict it on sent it to interested beta readers.

I just finished a fresh revision of FUTURE TENSE, a novel I drafted 2+ years ago. It's a young adult story about a boy about to age out of foster care who experiences glimpses into a violent future he's desperate to prevent.

Thanks to solid critique and suggestions from my agent, Nephele Tempest, and the lovely women in my new writing group (:waves to the #SFWG:), I have a much, much stronger story.

I'm looking for a few pair of fresh eyes--readers of YA work who might be interested in taking a look and giving me their honest thoughts on the story. Pop me an email at lisa@ljcohen.net.
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This Issue's Story

"Diversity" is a story that emerged from a dream. I woke up one morning from a sensory-rich dream that became the core of the scene where Varna exchanges 'gifts' with the Tuv delegate. It was one of those moments that shook me with its strength and its vivid imagery and would not let me go until I captured it somehow.

I always keep something to write with and on by my bed; you never know when your subconscious is going to whisper something to your conscious self.

I hope you enjoy "Diversity."

(Special thanks to reader Susan Risdall for her comments on an earlier version of this story.)

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Diversity
LJ Cohen

Varna bit back the urge to click her tongue in distress as she studied her tall, barrel chested boss.  His voice, so well suited to vid broadcasts and important speeches to even more important people, felt far too large for her small cubicle. She struggled to keep her throat relaxed and her overvoice silent.

"Your participation is essentially a formality," he said, leaning over her desk and smiling. He had a charm that came across as both well-practiced and genuine, almost childlike. "You're not technically part of the diplomatic team and the actual negotiations will take place after the welcoming ceremony." Face to face the Ambassador's charisma felt like a blast of heat from a plasma furnace. "So, what do you think?" he asked.

She clasped her hands under the desk to keep from fidgeting. What did she think? Varna had worked at the Embassy long enough to know it didn't really matter what she thought. His direct presence here made her assignment to the mission merely seem like a request instead of genetic expediency.

What did she think? Varna clamped her teeth down. She thought this was a massive mistake. But you didn't just say that to Earth's most high ranking inter-planetary Ambassador. Hell, Ambassador Berwick probably spoke more of her grandparents' native Tuvlun than she did, and he didn't even have the right shaped palate. She didn't even realize she was tapping the tip of her tongue against the high arch of her mouth until the drum beat of her anxiety filled the room.
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Continue reading "Diversity" in the attached pdf, or download the pdf, epub, or mobi formats from my website.

This downloads page has all three formats and information about how to open the file on your preferred reading device.
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